I didn’t find it chaotic but maybe a little chaotic is a good thing…like you’re working out what you’re thinking & not all thoughts can be summarised neatly and wrapped up in a bow. Which is more honest and representative of reality imo & is CLEVER bc that’s the point of this piece of writing I think
I think that stream of thoughts at the beginning is one of the best and most relatable things I've read on Substack this year 💛 Thanks for putting it out there Chloe.
I didn’t find it chaotic but maybe a little chaotic is a good thing…like you’re working out what you’re thinking & not all thoughts can be summarised neatly and wrapped up in a bow. Which is more honest and representative of reality imo & is CLEVER bc that’s the point of this piece of writing I think
The opening paragraph was so relatable! I wonder what my version would be like.
I think that stream of thoughts at the beginning is one of the best and most relatable things I've read on Substack this year 💛 Thanks for putting it out there Chloe.
Love this piece!